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I was hurting. My arms, my legs, my head, all of them were suffering. I tried to open my eyes, but the strong light didn't let me to. I tried again and then i saw the sun. A black sun, in the middle of the azure sky. But how could it be possible? The sun had to be gold...Maybe my eyes hurted too much.Or maybe i was dreaming. But it was too real and too painful to be a dream. I was so confused. I tried to get up, but i felt like my whole body was tied, so i just looked around me. What i saw left me speechless. Everything was covered with red sand, like it was dry blood. I could see a lot of people familiar to me in some ways trying to stand, walk, run, scream. But they all started to give up, one by one. A small child was trying to talk. I saw his lips trying to form the word ''mom'', but nothing came out of his mouth. He started to cry with no tears and then he looked at me with a pair of black, empty eyes. Then he just turned into red dust and disapeared. I stamped my eyes. Ι knew that everyone in there would turn into dust like that child. I knew that i was one of them. I just needed to stay calm. I had to remember, because the most of my memories where blurred. I could only remember my face, my family and the colours of the environment. But even these things were pictured as photos in my confused head. I couldn't remember my life, my name, and any sound that i propably have heard. Maybe i was deaf from the beggining. But that wasn't what really concenred me. Did that child died? If so, it meant i was about to die too. I couldn't let that happen. But i didn't know what to do. That child gave up and that's why he disapeared. And this place was nothing but a desert, a desert full of sun. But maybe if i kept lying like this, i would disapear as well. So, what should i do?
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UsagiChan99 Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
mah, you should start walking + there is the "stash" and "compose in stash" so you should write stories in stash and use journals for other reasons
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jerzyna-chan Jul 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
it's ok i prefer to write the story as a journal...but thanks for the advice though :)
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UsagiChan99 Jul 27, 2013  Student General Artist
okay :)
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jerzyna-chan Jul 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i will continue the story tomorrow. I will do a part everyday, so everyone can vote...:)
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malachis15 Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
walk
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jerzyna-chan Jul 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
ok :)
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lightbleueyes Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Start to walk! ^^
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jerzyna-chan Jul 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yay :) that's what i wanted too...:)
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lightbleueyes Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome! :tighthug: 
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jerzyna-chan Jul 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D :D :D
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